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Rapid City 2

By joshdahl 12:07 PM

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  • Writerdwyer

    Hey Josh,

    I would suggest a small change to the last two pages. Sort of merge the current page 24 and 25, so we're switching between Max coming up on Hourglass and Hourglass on the phone. Then just make the last page a slash of Max shutting her in the head. I think it'd be a great image to end on.

    I like what's going on. It feels like we're building up steam. We'll have to chit chat about the scripts in person once I've caught up on them all.

    -Mike